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Alicia's avatar

Super vivid! I felt like I was in the living room with them. Childhood homes can be sooo creepy.

Charlie Walls's avatar

Thank you Alicia I'm glad you liked it!

Breeze Delacroix's avatar

Yeeesh. This was an interesting read. The Ghost be damned the father turned out to be the monster in this story. Breaks my heart but this one that will stick with me.

Charlie Walls's avatar

Thank you for the kind words! Glad the story was affecting!

R.S.T.'s avatar

Gripping. This is why words cost very little. Thank you Charlie.