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Andrea (Andy) Curran 🌄's avatar

Really fantastic work! Chilling!

One-leg Story teller's avatar

Wow you really nailed it. Had me hooked immediately. Great Job

R.S.T.'s avatar

Great job Charlie.

Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

Great job, Charlie. Reminds me of a comic called Scream! from back in the day. Specifically, a van had crashed into the sea, spilling a payload of radioactive waste. Something monstrous emerged from the wreckage. I never got to finish it. So yeah, this is a classic.

Alicia's avatar

No happy endings here! 🤯

Charlie Walls's avatar

That sounds like an awesome story too!